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Quiet! Something is stalking us! by Juffs Quiet! Something is stalking us! by Juffs
For :iconsarafina1892:. From left to right, Bakari and Amun.


Story written by *Sarafina1892:

Prince Amun and Bakari were heading to pride rock, but Amun stopped. Bakari stopped after him but with a puzzled look. “Amun? What’s wrong?” he asked his older brother. Amun quickly turned his head and frowned. “Shh!” he said strictly. He turned his head away from his brother again and turned his head from side to side slowly to see what was bothering him. Bakari looked around, worried. There was nothing. Bakari’s eyes shot wide at his brother. “Amun! What’s wrong! I see noth-“ Amun put a paw on Bakari’s mouth. “Quiet! Something is stalking us!” growled Amun quietly. Bakari looked around again. Still nothing. “But there is nothi-!” suddenly a roar was heard, and a shadow jumped over the grass. It showed the colour of the figure, it was a lioness. The lioness pounced on Bakari, trying to rip him to pieces. But Bakari’s paws kept on stopping the lioness’s paws, his eyes still shot opened but wider. “AMUUN!” he yelled. Amun made a wild roar, lashing his claws across the lioness’s cheek to make the lioness hit the ground. But the move had only hit her cheek. Leaving three blood scars on her left cheek. Amun pounced on the lioness, then everything went silent except for Amun breathing and growling with his teeth clenching together. Moving his head up and down at the same time. The lioness’s eyes shot wide opened, then frowned. “Get off me.” She hissed. Amun frowned, getting off the lioness. He went beside his brother. The lioness got up, grinning with her right eyebrow up. “I’m very impressed of your hunting skills, lion.” She said. Amun raised an eyebrow.
“We want to know why you are here in our lands.” Said Bakari. “Oh, I’m sorry.” spoke the lioness. “Sorry for what? Suddenly attacking at my younger brother?” asked Amun. “I see. So you must be brothers.” Said the rouge. The lions glanced at each other, then looked at the lioness. “Name?” asked Amun. “Zita.” She said. “I’m Prince Amun and this is my younger brother Bakari. You may as well get lost before dad finds out your here.” He said. Zita glared at them surprised. Then she grinned. “But wait! I need to show you a place before I leave!” said Zita. Amun snarled and crouched a bit. “Fine. Lead us the way.” He demanded. Zita nodded and left them, with an unaware evil smirk across her face.
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SuperSayian5Naruto Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) XD LOVE IT la in love
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Lady-Satra Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Imagine them is the scene of Jurasic park where the 2 velociraptors are stalking the kids in the kitchen.....PHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASHAHAHAHA *Breathe* HAHAHAHA ha.
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KevinRollins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wait, they're just gonna follow the lioness who just attacked them? A lioness they never met, in fact. She attacks them and says, "come see this before I go." She doesn't even offer any sort of convincing argument. How do they trust her? "Oh, you tried to kill me, and now you just want me to follow you? Okay! This can't possible go wrong!" As they say, "IT'S A TRAP!" But I do want to know what happens next. It's grabbed my interest.

Also, that drawing is good too. :D
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DerpyDashHooves1876 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Like they say, people can make things when people don't believe those things that happen in the real world. :giggle:
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KevinRollins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hmm. I suppose that's true. Can't wait to see what happens to them, though.
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DerpyDashHooves1876 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
You will have to wait and see! :-) I already commissioned Juffs another picture about this story. :D
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KevinRollins Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Yay. *waits patiently*
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thereturnofkopa Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!! that is such a cool story. i wanna read more. lol and the pic makes me laugh.
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SnowBumbee Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ohoh, the expressions are adorable ! :la: This is amazing ! =D
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